After our focus group watching our Film trailers rough cut, they had some suggestions on how we should progress our editing stages.
One feedback was that we should make our genre more obvious, as we had not finished our editing stage it wasn't really clear what our genre was and we had not incorporated the "generic corpus" of our trailer.
They also said that we should include less of the narrative of our full film in the trailer so there are still things that the audience want to find out.
The viewers suggested we included more of the other characters involved in the story line, such as the mother and the police man who is looking for Becki.